Drugs that I have run into at school this year are weed and coke. Weed would be the biggest out the two on campus. Because when I go outside I see people all the time just sitting around smoking, or people walking smoking also. But a few times when I've been at 7-Eleven I've been asked if I wanted to buy coke, then when I’ve been at some parties random guys came up to me and asked if I wanted to buy some drugs. But this is much different than how it is in high school.
When I was in high school everyone mostly just smoked weed, and thought it was the coolest thing to do, but when I came to college I found out that weed isn't that great even though a lot of people do it. Then in high school coke wasn't that big, but in college I see that more and more people are starting to do it. Also I found out that the reason women mostly like to do it, because it helps them loss weight they say. But I think that’s not a good enough reason for consuming these things
But overall when it comes down to it, everyone is going to try something at some point in their life, and drugs are everywhere it doesn't matter if it's in college or high school, drugs are just out there. Truly there's nothing that we can do to stop drugs, but when your time comes and you’re getting pressured into doing something just say no. Just never give into people and their pressures.
Your content is good, but typos and grammatical errors bring down your grade. 12/15
ReplyDeleteSome errors to fix:
* Drugs that I have run (not ran) into at school this year are (not is) weed and coke.
* 7-Eleven, Overall
* This should be a separate sentence: It doesn't matter if it's in college or high school, drugs are just out there.
* never give in to people